050: Graceful Waterfowl

August 26, 2023

This one took a few attempts, but I’m quite pleased with how it came out. I didn’t get the pacing right at first, and I couldn’t figure out how Kevin would fall down the waterfall. I originally had Roy as the one falling down, but it got switched to Kevin for plot reasons. He flies, how is he supposed to just fall? I stumbled around for a while before I found the ‘secondary joke’ when he avoids the obvious log breaking but gets hit with another log anyway. I love jokes like that.

Keep working at it and you’ll find your way.